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Your post is full of useful information, but you may want to cut some of it out. You were talking very fast and it is difficult to keep up at times. Also, the program cut you off so we did not hear the last things you had to say. My suggestion would be to cut some stuff out and leave the most important stuff in there. I think other viewers would get more out of it if you were able to speak slower. You were definitely very thorough, and it shouldn't be too hard to change if you decide to do so. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou have some great information in there. I don't think anything needs cut out, but maybe write out a script before recording the voki so you're not left trying to think of what to say. Not sure why the end was cut off but I would have loved to hear what else you had to say. Great post. Awesome baby at the beach haha.
ReplyDeleteLike the others said, this was another great post. A lot of very good, vital information is contained in it. Jason is right, however, that you should edit it so that it does not cut off at the end, possibly by pulling out some information or, like Cody said, by writing a script. Slow down a little, you want people to be sure to understand you, and not everyone speaks English so well as to keep up with your speed.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on this post! The baby with the background is cute, funny, and eye catching. You were very informative, you spoke a little fast sometimes, but in general you were clear and straight to the point
ReplyDeleteI love the edit! It turned out perfect, great information and not nearly so rushed! Wonderful work!
ReplyDeleteYou made several points of important information and you mentioned good examples to go along with them. Overall, great post.
ReplyDeleteI loved your post. It is full of very helpful information. In fact, your post includes all of the information we learned in our professional writing class about writing effective emails. The only thing that I could think of that you could improve on is similar to what others have said, and that is make your voice clearer. Maybe in the future you should try calling the voki recorder from a land line and going into a quiet room while you are recording. Otherwise, the post was great and I think that this would be very useful to someone reading our blog.
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